Saturday, June 14, 2008

poetic beauty

THOUGHTS OF YOU...The first thought of you and I,Am engulfed by an emptiness...You are away from me,and I cannot lie,I miss you dearly, I confess!A heartache, shall I call it - a pain, bittersweet...Leaves me wondering about your existence in my life...A fresh breath of air that had swept me off my feet,And your memories now cut through like a knife...A void you have created,That even time cannot make up for,At the hands of fate, I feel cheated,It could've bestowed on me, a little more...It seems just y'day when you were around,With promises of togetherness and loyalty, immense...Today they've been shattered and without a sound,A heart lies empty that once had your presence!Your thoughts now clutter my mind,And point to a thing I should plainly see - A question the answer to which I have soon to find -"Will you ever have thoughts of me?"

3 comments:

SAGII'S said...

Heyy.. Beautifully written.. :) well written.. loved it.. and wld like to tell u, bttr things r destined 4 ur future.. :)
read ur comment on mah blog too.. thnks :) Seems ur stayin abroad too

Butterfly said...

Strange how we clsoe ourselves to so many things our frnds go through....

And I completely ahd no idea!

Butterfly said...

And yes! beautiful lines!